Concept sketch!

Another tutorial today and got some feedback from my animatic. some of the shots were still a little confusing, as some of the angles made it confusing. another point was also the ending was a little too quick, which i picked up on the other post.I also drew out one of the scenes, with an influence of the Alice in Wonderland DS game:


it seems that it is a little more effective with a slight outline where it marks the floor and the building, but that its my point of view. i will do the same with some of the angled shots, because it may work for this scene, but it may not work for the classroom scenes. Also to solve the angle problems i need to draw out a sort of blue print, to map out where the characters are in each scene, as i think this would make me more aware of the space and angles.
Another point that was raised in my tutorial was the concept of the new girl coming in at the end. At the moment I haven't distinguished whether she is different as a foreigner or maybe she is different physically. This is important as both will portray different meanings, so i need to decide on what i want to portray and then do some character designs for her.